One activity that I enjoy is fishing. When I was 6 years I used to go to my cabin in Wisconsin every summer. When I was there my grandpa taught me how to fish. Even though I didn't realize it at the time, I think this experience is what made me love fishing today.
I think this passage needs help because it doesn't have enough description about fishing with my grandpa.
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You are correct, more detail would be much more helpful. Where in Wisconsin, did u catch anything with him, any special or particular moment u remember?
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